Monday, 15 June 2020

My favourite writing for term 4 last year

Hello blogger in last year Te Ana Ako we have been write about:
If I Were In Charge Of The World.

If I Were In Charge Of The World


If I were in charge of the world,
I’d cancel plastic bag 
I’d cancel poisonous mushrooms  
I’d even cancel itch bugs 


If I were in charge of the world,
There would be flying vehicles 
There would be free stuff
There even would  be technology 


 If I were in charge of the world,
You wouldn’t have to argue 
You wouldn’t have brush your teeth yourself 
You even wouldn’t have do your homework
Or you wouldn’t need to do any work at all.


If I were in charge of the world,
You could have play date and sleepover all the time
And the person who forgot to brush
and sometimes forgot to flush 
 would still be allowed to be
 in charge of the world.

Because this is me and my friends.

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora, I'm Arden from Owairaka Primary. According to what you said... I would be perfectly fine with you being in charge of the world. But my question is: What would be the punishments if you didn't follow these rules?

    See you around
    Arden

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  2. Talofa Lava Vivian
    It's me Erana from Te Waka Ako I really liked your blog post. I think that you would be a great person to be in charge of the world. What else would you change? I can remember when we made the poems last year. I can't wait to see more from your blog:) here is the link to my blog:https://wpseranam.blogspot.com/
    Erana

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