Hello blogger's
Today in class we finished the poem we wrote about"with a friend" Here is the poem I wrote:
I can sit with a friend
and dig a pit with a friend
and make yummy cakes all day.
I can eat ice cream with a friend
and play in a team with a friend
and draw in our own ways.
I can finish tasks with a friend
And make masks a friend
and share each other's things.
I can sing with a friend
and enjoy spring with a friend
and play notes like ding dong ding.
Bye blogger's 😀
Kia Ora Vivian. Its Angelina from Te Waka Ako in Waitemata.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your beautiful poem. It was a great and cool poem. It reminded me of when we did poetry competition and some people made their own poem. Brittany also found one about friendship. Maybe next time you could add a bit more information about why you wrote it and how long it took?
Other than that I loved your blog!
If you can check out my blog please, http://wpsangelinac.blogspot.com/
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Kia Ora Vivian. My name is Brittany and I am in Waitemata at Waikowhai Primary School. What an amazing blog post this is. I like how you tried to make your poem long not short. It reminded me of when we write poems in my class or listen to poems. Maybe next time you could add a little more information about what you had to do, like did you have to plan first and then write your poem or could you write it straight away? Thank you for sharing your work with me. If you have any time feel free to check out my blog at wpsbrittanyp.blogspot.com
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Hi Vivian I'm Miriama from Waikowhai Primary School. I like your poem its a nice friend ship poem. Maybe next time you could change the font but other than that I love your poem keep up the good work and have a fantastic weekend bye
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